… After

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I made you a promise at the beginning of the course.

And now it is time to see if I delivered. Here comes the hard evidence of exactly how much you have learned!

Let’s see how you score today with that scene from Breaking Bad.
Grab your stopwatch again, and set up a new page in your screenwriting software.

Don’t look at the earlier version of this. You need to start it fresh, and then compare your work with your first attempt.

Ready? Start your timer, and … Go!

So? How did you do this time?

I’m convinced that you made a massive improvement. Have a look at that first attempt.

How did you describe the scene differently from last time?

Compare your work, and write any observations in your script journal. If you wish, you can also note down the difference in time between your first and second attempt.

This will be the final entry in the journal!

With the result in mind – and everything else you learned over the past 3 weeks, it’s now time to review my work. 

What did you think of Immersion Script?