Feature Discovery – Excerpt #5
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WAIT LIST: S106 – S131
The page numbers may be somewhat misleading, as you don’t know where you are in the story. But perhaps that’s the intention…
Can you feel roughly where we are, even without the page numbers?
There’s something Kate does three times in this story, and this may be a hint as to where we’re at.
Structure, remember? Something for your report/diary.
Earlier we established that this script was written firmly from Kate’s POV. This helps the reader’s immersion in the story. But have you noticed exactly how Carly Hallman achieves this? What techniques make us go into her mind? (There’s one example early in Scene 113.)
Love/sex scenes. Among the hardest to film, and not easy to write, either. Ideally, every love scene is different, depending on the characters involved, the geographical circumstances, the time frame etc.
What can you say about the love scene in today’s segment? Would you have handled it differently? How?